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You're my heart's riot.
The bubble of emotions,
that shapes who I am.
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Personally my favourite out of my Haiku Folder
I love it dearly

I would like feedback on my use of words and whether the piece, despite it's shortness, comes together and gives a strong mental image of love.

Thanks for reading!
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:iconjackertan:
This is the best haiku i've read all decade
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~Chaotic-Whispers Jun 23, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
woah - all decade?
THANKS :icongwompplz:

thanks for faving it!
if you want to devwatch me - i'll have some new haikus submitted soon...
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:iconjackertan:
I just might ferocious lion. I just might
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~Chaotic-Whispers Jun 23, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
haha!
Your lizard is extremely distracting xD
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~einnobztron Jun 15, 2010  Student Writer
oh, I like this a lot.
I like the word bubble. . .it fits very well.
and I love that song :D
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~Chaotic-Whispers Jun 15, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Me too ...
Paramore just well - rock!
Thanks so much :tighthug:
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~einnobztron Jun 15, 2010  Student Writer
haha you're very welcome :D
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:iconbubbleope:
LOVE IT! <3
Quality in this quantity.. I'm telling ya.
It's beautiful! (:
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~Chaotic-Whispers Jun 15, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Hehe thanks Marina!
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