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i want to hear your footsteps

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Footsteps, footprints.


"What is the difference?" you ask me.

"Footprints show you of what was once there . Something that is not necessarily there now.
Something that was, not is.
It can be evidence of a crime, or a constant reminder that someone left.
They bring forward memories, that sometimes long to be forgotten.

Footsteps, however, are made by someone in the present.
A noise that sometimes follows you home.
The noise in the dead of the night, when someone is trying to sneak into bed quietly.
A sound that can bring fear, or safety."


"Which is better?" your smile lights up.

"Footsteps."

"Why?"


"It means I always know you are there."
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I want to hear your footsteps follow me when I leave

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namenotrequired's avatar
Excuse me, may I ask why you've hidden a couple of comments? They were for #lyriclub's critique week so we kinda need to be able to see the comments in order to judge them. ^^; Could you unhide them for me please? :)

If you really don't want to, please let me know, and we can figure out another solution :)